Last night I had a dream about my Green Night characters. In the dream, I thought, "This dream is totally telling me how to fix this book!" Unfortunately, this magical fix involved:
Trees magically appearing when sex happens. (not how magic usually works in that world. Beside, wtf?)
Keeping the action focused in one location, rather than as a travelogue. (Um...it is already)
Transformers. Bumblebee, to be precise.
That said, the dream was fun and sex-filled, because that's what happens when I watch Tudors right before bed.
Trees magically appearing when sex happens. (not how magic usually works in that world. Beside, wtf?)
Keeping the action focused in one location, rather than as a travelogue. (Um...it is already)
Transformers. Bumblebee, to be precise.
That said, the dream was fun and sex-filled, because that's what happens when I watch Tudors right before bed.
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